English

Dear Reader,

In english class we had to choose one of our favorite essays that we wrote. I chose my essay about "Graduation 2011". I chose this essay because I think that I really used some great transitions and I really have a great sentence structure. When you read this essay I would like for you to really focus and pay close attention to my transitions and sentence structure.

Malissa Reid
October 22, 2007
English 1
Graduation 2011

How many freshmen’s here believe that they are going to be High School graduates, and soon college freshmen’s in 2011? Are you really going to be a graduate based on your academic skills you perform in this course of your life? There are many ways that you can accomplish your goals, before it’s to late.

One thing that may help you accomplish your goals is determination. As responsible citizens of the United States we will have to be employed. In order for us to succeed in life we would have to first receive our high school diploma, which will help us to getting into a good college. Once we get into college we would have an opportunity to study the course that we wish to, find a law firm that I could be apart of, and then maybe expand and run my own law firm, where I can have people working for me or even with me.

I also believe I am going to be a graduate in 2011 because this is a great learning environment, and there are many different ways to learn. Some people like to learn by seeing videos, reading lectures, and other like to learn by doing activities. In history class we have been learning about how humans act in society, by doing several activities. Some of the activities we’ve used were the balloon experiment; they gods must be crazy, and the plane experiment. There are activities where you could learn but also have fun, and many students enjoyed them.

To obtain my goal for the future I am going to perform academically in High School and receive my diploma in 2011, what about you?
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